Monday, December 21, 2009

seductress

















my love
my love
be silent now
and listen
perhaps
maybe
if you close your eyes and open your heart
you will hear me better
close your eyes and be silent and listen
it is just you and me now
you and me and nobody to see
or hear
us
i have imagined this moment so many times
dreamed it
this moment of
you and me and nobody else
but wait
you move too quickly
do not rush
i want to savor our moment
this moment
one moment that must last us forever
and while your eyes are closed
i want only to look at you
and you only to listen to me
no
do not open your eyes
my love
i beg you
please
your face is so delicate
your mouth is so shy
your skin
your eyes
your neck
your back
your hair
your scent
i have imagined them so many times
i have imagined touching 
your sex
not with my fingers
my hands
not even
with my lips
but with my heart
can you see that image from behind your closed eyes
my love
can you see me
feel me
when you feel my very first touch and i feel yours
when i touch you first
it will be with my heart
my heart will be
around
on
in
you
and then
you will have my heart
and then
you will feel me
around
on
in
you
you will feel the heat rush through your blood and
out of your fingertips
out of your toes
out of your head
out of your eyes
but no
do not open them
your eyes
yet
not before i touch you
not with my heart
but with my lips
my lips that want to 
taste
bite
devour
you
wait, now
my love
my invisible love
while i part my lips
oh so slowly
this moment
one moment that must last us forever
while i part my lips
and
close them over your eyes
and
whisper
chant
sing to you
what i have imagined
and
wait, now
my love
while i part my lips
oh so slowly
this moment
one moment that must last us forever
while i part my lips
and 
close them over your heart
and 
sob
weep
cry
what i have felt
and 
wait, now 
my love
while i part  my lips
oh so slowly
this moment 
one moment that must last us forever
while i part my lips
and close them over your sex
and
fondle
kiss
caress
what i have desired
and my lips will linger there
will linger and linger
and wait
and rather than be the seeker
they will become the sought
and they will be
around
on
in
you
and you will be in them
you and my lips
my lips and you
are you listening my love
but wait
do not rush
do not open your eyes
let
this moment
one moment that must last us forever
last
imagine
it is me
and you
and me
and you
my love
my invisible love
your hands are on my breasts
your tongue upon my lips
your legs above my shins
your sex upon my hips
and we have never spoken one word to one another
our voices have not discoursed but while
your hands
your tongue
your legs
your sex
are speaking to my heart
your voice speaks
one word
to my ear
seductress
your body on mine
your hands pinning me down
your tongue burning my lips
your legs bruising my shins
your sex penetrating my sex
me
and we both know that
this moment
this one moment that must last us forever
must last
in our imaginations
the imaginations of you and me
us
because you see
once we have touched
my love
my invisible love
you and me
in reality
the imagination will no more be our refuge
the trick will no more be our retreat
because you see
the imagination creates gossamer dreams
that only the imagination can decree
and
because you see
once we have touched
my love
you and me
in reality
your eyes will open
though you may want to keep them shut
forever
closed upon this imagined scene
once we have touched
your eyes will open
and this moment
this one moment that we so want to last us forever
my invisible love
will disappear

57 comments:

  1. Nevine , you got the power ( did i say this before ?)
    i started to read this with eyes and brain .
    sundely i was in a hypinotic movement twisting and geting dizzie .
    how did you get this ?so intence and real .
    fantastic .

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  2. Yummy! This just rolls and rolls and rolls. And builds and builds and builds. Nice one. Bravo!

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  3. I want to make love right now, you made it so beautiful to imagine, I feel my insides coming vibrantly alive...
    Thank you so much!

    Secretia

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  4. Inspired!! Love how you have made love with your prose.

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  5. This is sensual writing at its best Nevine. Look back and you will see a trail of souls, trying to keep pace.

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  6. you are the seductress my friend....I held my breath in anticipation the entire time reading this, Oh the joy....

    peace

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  7. All you commenting Peeps...Shhhhhh! I am whispering one to one....

    With love.

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  8. orgasmic! That used to my pseudonyme!
    but you resurect it.....a poem i could have written.....but its much more beautiful coming from a woman!
    this is how i talk to the daughter of the sky....what a beautiful way to be devoured??

    Hmmmm...i will close my eyes and noT utter a words..;-)

    encore, tu me froles, tu me fait palpiter....la bouche est un lieu le plus violent, sensual et eblouissante,.....

    PASSE DE BONNE FETES !!

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  9. I had to do something, somewhere in the middle of reading this... but I am back... oooff! I sigh at orgasmic peace...;)

    Wow Woman. That IS what it is and no other thing...

    I love the 'invisible' word every so often...

    Sublime my dear friend! (10/10)

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  10. The rhythm of this poem mimics the physical one of making love and has the same sense of suspended reality one experiences then. Well done. I liked your photo very much.

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  11. Beautiful poem. Beautiful seductive poem. I love mainly the rhythm and, while reading it I was thinking of.......Pablo Neruda. I don't know why but you made me think of his love poems...stunning

    XX

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  12. Caio - That's the idea, Caio, for you to become hypnotized! ;-)

    Reaper - Keep breathing... you're quite welcome!

    Gerry - I love "yummy", so thank you.

    Secretia - Oh my, woman. Go take care of business, then...

    Mark - Welcome and thank you! I hope you won't be too shy to return.

    Martin - I really appreciate that you used the word "sensual" because that is exactly what I was trying to evoke - sensual vs. sexual. Now I can rest easy! :-)

    Steven - I knew you would like this, Fetish Man!

    Steve - Oh, now I have tears in my eyes. That's sweet.

    Craftsman - "Orgasmic" c'était ton nom de plume? Ouf!!! Mais j'suis pas etonée du tout. Et je suis d'accord que la bouche... c'est tout! Bonnes fêtes à toi aussi, Craftsman!

    Dulce - Shame on you, lady! Did you have to go and share that with all of us? But I know you're kidding... you are, right? But hey, Dulce, whatever makes you happy, Sweetest! ;-) And thank you.

    Judith - I always appreciate your very observant comments. And as for the photo, I thought it fit perfectly with the poem, but I cannot take credit for that masterpiece of photographic art.

    Lorenza - Thank you. And I am also a great admirer of Pablo Neruda. I'm flattered that you thought of his work while you read mine.

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  13. Oh GOD! Ain't that the TRUTH! Your writing...your writing...

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  14. Nevine, if I didn't have an orgasm, it was because I was in front of the computer. Whoever has said only the organ penetrates has not felt the penetration of words.

    Joy always,
    Susan

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  15. Phew! Is it hot in here all of a sudden? I think I'm having a hot flash. Might faint.

    Jai

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  16. It was for me everything romantic, sensual and erotic. It build to a sort of climax and I smiled at your feat. There is genius in the tempo but more than that was the truth of such a moment. I loved it.
    Thanks for sharing this with me.
    Warmest regards,
    Simone.

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  17. How interesting, Nevine, how beautiful, and sad... The body and the heart, the closed eyes as guardians of the illusion, the moment gained and lost... Excellent!

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  18. Cat - :-) That's smiling with childish beams... Thank you!

    Susan - And your words are so filled with wisdom and truth. That was beautifully said, and thank you so much.

    Jai - Go fan yourself, girl!

    Simone - Coming from the lady that writes such romantic words, I'm just smiling with pleasure. Thank you, Simone.

    Shadow - :-)

    Vesper - You read not only the lines, but also what was between them. Thank you for that, and for your appreciation as well!

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  19. Oh such glorius and devine moments with your loved one! With everyone's loved one!
    Beautiful!! Nevine!
    Wishing you everything that you would wish for yourself and your family!.
    Plenty of well-deserved happiness my pal!
    hugs hugs and
    love

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  20. A subtle work, Nevine, wrapped in elegance.

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  21. Having read all these comments for an outstanding artist-of-word-painting, I can add this, which has not been yet written:

    I have been here three times, and read this twice each session. Is there any way I can better express my pleasure at reading your wonderfully-inspired work?

    Certainly I am not the only one who is copying this for reading again and again? It is just that worthy and more, written with utterly sensual, seductive tenderness.

    "SEDUCTRESS" is a prayer to the goddess Aphrodite, a supplication to Eros that I might once again experience THAT ONE MOMENT WHICH MUST LAST FOREVER!

    Could we sometime learn if this is recently scribed, or if it is from your past (archives)?

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  22. Betty - Thank you so much, and best wishes for a beautiful holiday season to you as well. Hugs back at you.

    Rick - I appreciate your comment immensely. Thank you.

    Steve - Wow! I'm floored. And you can come back and read as often as you so desire. As for your last question, I wrote this the night before I posted it. I was sitting there thinking about how, when we imagine something, when we create a dream, our imagination can inflate the reality. I was also thinking about the anticipation of the first touch when we are newly in love, and how we sometimes feel slightly cheated after we have satisfied that first touch. We feel as if the anticipation was higher than the experience of the actual touch, sometimes... I have a complicated thought process sometimes, Steve. But there it is for you. The night before... and quite off the cuff once I started writing it... the words just came. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it so much. Thank you. :-)

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  23. very intimate. thank you for the private window into your passion, so i might visit mine this day, as well.

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  24. magical mistress mesmerizes most madly!

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  25. The perfect love inside our minds burns bright. Who would want to risk its faltering into something less than the brilliant flames you've painted here? Can reality ever compare to imagination, can it bring us anything that is beyond our individual reach? Ultimately, it might be fear that stops us from believing it can be so. Or maybe it's the courage born of experience. Either way, I love the pull and tension you've harnessed here, Nevine. This swept me up, body and soul.

    let
    this moment
    one moment that must last us forever
    last
    imagine
    it is me
    and you
    and me
    and you
    my love


    My favorite part. Your line breaks are always so perfectly placed. It makes the reading flow like the crackling thoughts in our own mind. Beautiful, beautiful work. I do so love your words.

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  26. Oh Nevine thank you for reminding me of a time in my life. There are other ways to love now, but boy that is still the best way.

    Love Renee xoox

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  27. Yours is one of the few I always come back... as you always comment on our comments...
    Oh my God... again.
    This time am trying to see beyong the pure sex appeal this already has and understand the not opening of the eyes as if anyone , although only one is... Yet it is sad indeed.How can that be?

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  28. I truly hope all your dreams for Christmas come true…

    Hope, peace and love…

    Xoxoxo

    Ps: I would meet you under the mistletoe anytime.

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  29. It's an ode to love, Nevine:)
    I wish you a fulfilling love an a very merry Chrismas.

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  30. Kim - Actually, this was not necessarily my passion, but a perspective on imagined love. I'll be waiting to read what you write.

    Laughingwolf - Now that was a fine line of alliteration, and thank you! :-)

    Sarah - Your comments always make me smile with joy; you always understand me. "Yes" to everything you said, and I'm so flattered by the double "beautiful". You know I think you have very high talent, so your comment is drop-dead flattering. Thank you, Sarah. :-)

    Renee - You're so funny! But maybe there is no best way to love except what works for us right then and there...

    Dulce - Love is often sad, but I think it's sad in its sheer beauty. Or, it is also sad when we imagine it and then open our eyes and realize it was imagination...

    Reaper - And I wish you the same. As for meetings under the mistletoe, I always reserve those for my favorite man in the world - my husband. Have a good one, Reaper!

    Cildemer - And I wish you a Merry Christmas back, and a very Happy New Year as well. :-)

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  31. well, i've said it before - and it is true - you have been inside my mind my thoughts my words my own experiences - were you me in another life and i you, do you suppose?

    beautifully riveting, spellbinding, all of the above and more! brilliant!!!

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  32. Nevine,
    i just came to thankyou for the beautiful lessons you shared with me since the begining , as though you have always known me.
    For having me given from the depth in you, numerous treasures,
    kindness,
    beauty,
    respect,
    love.....
    and i realise how lucky i am to have you.

    i just wanted you to know that 'this is' christmas for me....
    to hold and behold persons like you whose souls are the magical lands into which i walk into.
    i bow before those things that spreads in the lands of your heart!

    i needed to tell you that more than everything... You have revealed to me through your words, writings, and attentions...who you really are!

    Et ton humanité m'emporte au dela de tous les mots.
    i love you so much my beautiful friend,and will always keep you in the sacred places of my soul.
    Have a wonderful christmas!

    May you be gathered , cherished and blessed !!

    joseph

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  33. Gypsywoman - Oh yes, I've known it from the start, Jenean. And I do suppose... you're right. We do share a spirit; that we do. Thank you so much for stopping in, Jenean. I know you're busy, so I do really appreciate it. Wishing you the best the season has to offer, and then some.

    Joseph - You've just made me cry... really. This is a beautiful wish with beautiful words like only you know how to create. I've appreciated your friendship immensely, and I have learned so much from you, especially about human tenderness. May this season bring you all the warmth and joy and love that you deserve, Joseph. And know that I will be thinking of you. And beyond that, I am speechless. Je t'embrasse, mon ami.

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  34. Dear Friends,

    Just want to let you know I will be away for a few days. I want to hang out with my husband and relax and chill and walk around the house barefoot and watch movies and snack and take small naps and go out for short walks and cook (which I LOVE to do) and just do nothing at all for a bit. I will be back the first week of January. In the meantime, I wish you all a beautiful time with family and loved ones and with yourselves. HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO ALL OF YOU!!!

    Nevine

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  35. The delicacy of the poem contrasts beautifully with the strength of some of the verses. The piece captures marvellously the act of contemplation and materialisation.

    Have a nice time off. It was also my pleasure meeting you and your beautiful poetry and shorts stories this year. I look forward to more. :-)

    Greetings from London.

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  36. I decided to sneak by today and am so glad I did. The title definitely reels me in and the flow is seductively cadenced. Much like a serpent swaying to the lure of melody. There is a tense plea for complete surrender and just focus on the moment where nothing else matters except for the skin, the scent, the curves, the longing, the lust...okay I need to stop now ;)

    Beautiful Nevine! Happy Holidays!!

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  37. Nevine- Yes, so far above and beyond sex. Sex could only envy and study this, I think. Great energy in this. ~rick

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  38. merry xmas to you and yours, m'dear :)

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  39. Nevine, dear Nevine,

    I am late coming hear
    The xmas madness
    Dragging me under
    Dragging me into
    The whirlpool
    That spins faster, and faster
    And then spits one out
    Exhausted
    On the far side of Xmas

    I pray, I trust, I think
    That you are well
    And your writing here
    Again shows
    Again explodes
    Into burning passion

    It is clear you
    Are on fire

    A great flame
    Turns the Texas sky to red
    To orange to yellow
    To burning passion

    I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed your company these past few weeks, months, your mind reading ability, your honesty, your intelligence... I think you went to Oxford or Cambridge or the Sorbonne ??? I think you went to the University of Burning Life... you possess the thirst for experience, for going to the edge, to leaning out over the edge, not afraid of looking down, not afraid of falling, ready to fly, plunging, flying spreading your wings, for wings you have...

    Take care Nevine, thank you...

    And happy holidays, wherever you are...

    :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: !

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  40. Oh. My. God. Nevine, that was so so beautiful.
    :) Happy Christmas x

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  41. "maybe if you close your eyes and open your heart
    you will hear me better"

    That was my favorite part.

    I like the way that you write. I hope that you are having an amazing holiday season right now.

    Kindest regards,
    Tom Bailey

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  42. Oh, oh, Nevine, sensual, like a slow-moving
    river, an all-encompassing sea of love.
    I adore how you've formed your poem to go
    down, as love goes down into our beings.
    As well as the words you isolate, this creates
    a quality of stillness upon the word, or
    I should say what the word in particular
    conveys. Beautiful!

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  43. Happy Holidays and Happy New Year!

    Jai

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  44. Cuban – And I look forward to continuing to visit with you. It’s always a pleasure!

    Sharla – Why should you stop? You should always allow yourself to keep going… especially when you’re on a thinking and writing roll!!!

    Rick – Thank you; I do so appreciate your feedback.

    Laughingwolf – Belated, yes, coming from me to you. But I hope you had a good one!

    Owen – It has been my pleasure and you know it. And I can’t wait to dive into more, on both the giving and the receiving levels. You are such a talent, Owen – I just can’t begin to tell you.

    Akasha – Thank you so much!

    Tom – I did have a nice break, so thank you.

    Cynthia – What a nice and discerning comment. I appreciate that.

    Jai – And a very Happy New Year to you as well!

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  45. Oh! How I hate asking this! But, Dear Nevine, could you please post again your comment to steveroni--I didn't even get to read it, before....ZAP!

    I will love you, wish you PEACE, and also LOADS of JOY in 2010.

    Steve E (aka. the DUMMY!)

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  46. Thank you my dear friend

    May the New Year make all your wishes come true!

    Happy 2010!***

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  47. Steve - I don't get it, Steve. My comment to you? Where? I'm lost... But I love you too. Lots and lots and lots. Tell me more on my new post. I'm sending it out in a few!!!

    Dulce - Thank to you. And your wishes too, my dear!!!

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  48. Nevine, this is just so SENSUAL!!! I soaked these words into my total being... felt my spirit drifting away into a sensual place where my imagination was free... just beautiful! One of my favorites, wow!

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  49. Roxy, thank you so much! How I appreciate that... You're awesome!!!

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  50. Holy hell,
    w.o.w.
    On more levels than you might know, holyhellwow.
    xo
    erin

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  51. Thank you... I'm beaming totally from the inside out. Because YOU are so good.... I'm beaming!

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  52. Hot for sure...very very hot.....

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  53. Hey, thanks for stopping in! And thank you...

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