tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post8924851342871249761..comments2023-08-25T10:00:43.026-05:00Comments on Dreams, Deliriums, and Other Mind Talk: Episodic Flickers in Black and WhiteNevine Sultanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comBlogger46125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-28151245215754170662010-07-26T07:18:07.340-05:002010-07-26T07:18:07.340-05:00Abeer - Ah, Nivo! Makes me feel like I'm at ho...Abeer - Ah, Nivo! Makes me feel like I'm at home. And how you compare birthing a poem to birthing a baby! Lovely, that. An interesting thought... really... very compelling. ;-)Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-79120050411925923632010-07-25T12:45:30.910-05:002010-07-25T12:45:30.910-05:00yes i did..and i am enjoying it here so much..i lo...yes i did..and i am enjoying it here so much..i love reading you Nivo,and yes i do Enjoy writing mine too..i find it most pleasurable during the making like a delivery..you work on it and be instantly waiting and dreaming of your baby's features till its actually born..then you smile,for it is certainly worth all the pain..:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-30442366012372044502010-07-25T10:06:34.215-05:002010-07-25T10:06:34.215-05:00Desert Rose, how lovely to see you here, reading t...Desert Rose, how lovely to see you here, reading this piece from a few weeks back. I had fun writing this one (well I have fun writing all of them) because I got to play with the cinema aspect a bit. So happy to know you enjoyed it and found it "sensuous". Thank you for the lovely thoughts.Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-11322827700589438112010-07-25T04:55:30.335-05:002010-07-25T04:55:30.335-05:00ok..i am really taken here! i agree with Wild Rose...ok..i am really taken here! i agree with Wild Rose,this piece is amazing cos it touched me deep as well..i find the two colors melting together in the dream of love is intriguing,,,sensuous and stunning!<br /><br />loved every word..sensual and i m flying around in your blog Nevine,wingless wearing only my heart..:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-1780179666746606562010-07-16T12:33:19.811-05:002010-07-16T12:33:19.811-05:00Jenean - Happy you liked my little play with roman...Jenean - Happy you liked my little play with romanticism. And I know how life calls, sometimes. Do take good care of yourself... and best wishes for your full recovery... and your full return!Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-600280378540512532010-07-14T11:21:13.926-05:002010-07-14T11:21:13.926-05:00oh, dear nevine! how you capture us all with your...oh, dear nevine! how you capture us all with your magnificent wordpictures/wordmovies - and this is no exception - just perfection - again! loved it - and you KNOW i loved the image!!! so sorry to have not been around for a while - for several weeks some sort of silly bug seemed to have attacked my physical self - and i was just out of sorts for days on end - better now but not totally gone -GYPSYWOMANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03042621041213415958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-44006570259836442172010-07-12T07:58:38.181-05:002010-07-12T07:58:38.181-05:00COL - You have such a spiritual way of reading thi...COL - You have such a spiritual way of reading things and understanding them, it is a pleasure always to know what you are thinking. This comment is a lovely poem! Thank you, my sweet friend.Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-77556300579045275452010-07-11T13:13:44.028-05:002010-07-11T13:13:44.028-05:00Tantra,
black and white breathing on each other, ...Tantra, <br />black and white breathing on each other, Expanding Love to its quantum level, <br />tearing through lotus roots, to pop out upon the sunkissed waters...the black from the roots, swirling to the white of the petals...<br />and <br />in the brain <br />once more <br />the rains have sweetly fallen.Craftsman of lighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14747434398075620991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-65766958732256667822010-07-11T07:05:44.292-05:002010-07-11T07:05:44.292-05:00Felicitas - Thank you... I don't usually plung...Felicitas - Thank you... I don't usually plunge into the romantic with my writing, but it had been a while so I thought I'd go back and play with it.<br /><br />Kim - Thank you for sharing your favorite lines...Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-82265873794837529612010-07-10T15:23:57.534-05:002010-07-10T15:23:57.534-05:00i love the image created by these words...
"...i love the image created by these words...<br /><br />"And so we stand entwined<br />on the sidewalk of a quiet<br />street corner in the milky halo<br />of a solitary street light<br />lips pressed to lips<br />breathless<br />for a very long time"<br /><br />wonderful. i could almost hear the film reel clicking along...Man Named Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04299332753447389139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-6038610821637345312010-07-10T10:40:06.700-05:002010-07-10T10:40:06.700-05:00Nevine, you do such a wonderful job of creating at...Nevine, you do such a wonderful job of creating atmosphere in your work. And you always leave us with so much to think about! I love the romantic quality of this piece.Felicitashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02365380167385885738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-39530729484542888472010-07-10T09:54:54.190-05:002010-07-10T09:54:54.190-05:00Cynthia - How lovely to see you here! And thank yo...Cynthia - How lovely to see you here! And thank you, especially about the "surreal". I try I try I try... And I smile when I see that it comes through. :-)Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-91303659028240865492010-07-09T20:11:44.223-05:002010-07-09T20:11:44.223-05:00Nevine, this "experience" you've poe...Nevine, this "experience" you've poem is<br />gorgeously surreal. The manner is which<br />you walah such atmosphere continues to<br />delight and amaze me.<br /><br />It's amazing I feel the love sheltered in<br />each word.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256391836026637655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-44304091083483554712010-07-09T14:09:27.628-05:002010-07-09T14:09:27.628-05:00Rick - I honestly can't tell you if there was ...Rick - I honestly can't tell you if there was a comment here before that might have disappeared. Blogger has been having fun with messing up comments these past couple of days... But thank you for letting me know, Rick. And I can truly appreciate an exquisite wine, so thank you for that very nice comment!<br /><br />Scribblers Inc - Thank you for stopping in for a visit, and most importantly Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-75887403809252551222010-07-09T14:06:07.612-05:002010-07-09T14:06:07.612-05:00Ashley - I have a very high appreciation for the e...Ashley - I have a very high appreciation for the exchanges I share both here and on others' blogs. That's the most fun part of blogging...<br /><br />Akasha - Thanks for the very sweet words. Playing around with words is a favorite pastime... I'm not sure what I'd do without it! :-)<br /><br />Cremilde - Merci for sharing your favorite lines! I always like that kind of feedback. Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-4154980530898105032010-07-09T08:13:59.213-05:002010-07-09T08:13:59.213-05:00welcome, nevine... hope your weekend's grand!welcome, nevine... hope your weekend's grand!laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-17895743242604036132010-07-09T01:30:56.325-05:002010-07-09T01:30:56.325-05:00Brilliant closure...amazing! Its like the sudden s...Brilliant closure...amazing! Its like the sudden slap of the winter cold when you least expect it and suddenly unlatch your window...<br /><br />amazing blog too...<br />wishes<br />Scribblers Inc.Scribblers Inchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01074085561810026537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-39758140073111140452010-07-08T22:59:56.937-05:002010-07-08T22:59:56.937-05:00I'm not sure that my last comment went through...I'm not sure that my last comment went through, so in case in didn't I had to tell you again that they don't make wine exquisite enough to toast this lovely poem.Rickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14546882686381428986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-57994348313576043342010-07-08T19:55:35.376-05:002010-07-08T19:55:35.376-05:00"we are the actors doing all
in a dance of sl..."we are the actors doing all<br />in a dance of slow motion"<br />I love those two lines.<br /><br />In fact I love it all. And it's the third time I've come to read your poem. And each time I've read it with such a pleasure. But I couldn't find the words to express my feelings! And still don't!<br /><br />***<br />Thanks for sharing, ma belle. And very big bisous***Cildemerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00493593893716571818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-77622272772126744332010-07-08T14:39:21.875-05:002010-07-08T14:39:21.875-05:00That was so beautiful Nevine. I just love how you ...That was so beautiful Nevine. I just love how you play about with words and turn them into something wonderful :)Akasha Savage.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13482147165827577180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-70410258219728884072010-07-06T18:38:57.195-05:002010-07-06T18:38:57.195-05:00Thanks Nevine! I look forward to it too! Welcomes ...Thanks Nevine! I look forward to it too! Welcomes are always sweet. Some bloggers don't show such appreciate for comments!Ashley Ashbeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05268928207063175136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-82497137147050202362010-07-06T14:28:06.485-05:002010-07-06T14:28:06.485-05:00Dulce – Well, I tried not to say too too much, but...Dulce – Well, I tried not to say too too much, but I’m afraid the words just kept slipping out of my head and I just couldn’t stop them. So, I allowed them to speed with me and take me where they wished. So glad you liked it, Sweetest… :-)<br /><br />Pat – Well, thank you. I do try, and I’m very pleased when I get such wonderful feedback. Thanks a bunch, Pat.<br /><br />Ashley – Sometimes a Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-88233676068360414782010-07-06T14:27:50.327-05:002010-07-06T14:27:50.327-05:00Caio – How wonderful to see you here! And thank yo...Caio – How wonderful to see you here! And thank you for your nice words…<br /><br />LW – Love that… and Sinatra. And thanks bunches for the “splendid”! That made me feel really good!!!<br /><br />Eva – I think complete infatuated love is really like a silent film. There is no need for words… almost. The love just glows with its own power. Thanks for the sweet words, Eva.<br /><br />Mme. DeFarge –Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-6460821958790233852010-07-06T07:13:18.460-05:002010-07-06T07:13:18.460-05:00This was a majestic read. Beautiful in every way. ...This was a majestic read. Beautiful in every way. The love held in silence between two lovers, almost shy with one another. Absolutely gorgeous Nevine.Nancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12947124526608761136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-25160356750267803012010-07-06T02:52:38.377-05:002010-07-06T02:52:38.377-05:00Ah, so you write beautiful poetry, too. This doesn...Ah, so you write beautiful poetry, too. This doesn't surprise me. Your fiction is poetic too.<br /><br />"speeding to a soundtrack<br />of our shortened breaths" - This made me think of old black and white footage which is sped up, way past real time. The lips moving make it appear that the people are talking very fast and moving very fast, thus the "speeding" creates &Ashley Ashbeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05268928207063175136noreply@blogger.com