tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post928646286915057016..comments2023-08-25T10:00:43.026-05:00Comments on Dreams, Deliriums, and Other Mind Talk: hovering in uncertain geometriesNevine Sultanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comBlogger51125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-33664050878846180672010-04-24T09:40:22.760-05:002010-04-24T09:40:22.760-05:00Mark - Thanks for going back and reading. And yeah...Mark - Thanks for going back and reading. And yeah, I wanted to experiment with a little math and poetry. Two of my favorite things... Glad you liked it!Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-84039013457946654102010-04-24T02:15:12.350-05:002010-04-24T02:15:12.350-05:00100 percent awesome. I like the assigning of coor...100 percent awesome. I like the assigning of coordinate points to probability.MCrittendenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08731494633980587776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-70820367333027260792010-04-09T15:00:37.779-05:002010-04-09T15:00:37.779-05:00Kim, no such thing as being late around here, ever...Kim, no such thing as being late around here, ever! And thank you for leaving such a sweet comment. I really, truly appreciate it.Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-25461788706355120902010-04-08T20:26:54.758-05:002010-04-08T20:26:54.758-05:00i'm late to the party. i missed the RSS update...i'm late to the party. i missed the RSS update...<br /><br />anyway. WOW! at first reading this was too much - it darts and changes: rhythms, images, metaphors... like a dream state.<br /><br />so wonderful to read you again.Man Named Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04299332753447389139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-42567961831410077042010-04-08T18:41:08.868-05:002010-04-08T18:41:08.868-05:00Deanna, one more thing! I forgot to mention, I can...Deanna, one more thing! I forgot to mention, I can't seem to link to a blog from your name. Do you have one, or are you a reader only? If you are a blogger, I would be most interested in exploring your site.Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-70814227313107989122010-04-08T16:44:35.925-05:002010-04-08T16:44:35.925-05:00Joaquin - Your analysis is amazing. It's like ...Joaquin - Your analysis is amazing. It's like you were reading my mind. But you really have a gift for getting to the heart of things, and I have seen this over and over again. So, I'm not surprised. Just feeling really good to be understood, and appreciated. Thank you.<br /><br />Cuban - I hope you're enjoying KL; it's a lovely city. And the food!!! Yummy! I have memories. Enjoy Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-45574299697475343322010-04-08T16:09:47.709-05:002010-04-08T16:09:47.709-05:00Nevine, I found your blog via Jai, and am so glad ...Nevine, I found your blog via Jai, and am so glad I did. This is absolutely breathtaking. I look forward to reading more of your work.Deannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02612458168941437163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-63831551223754451032010-04-08T12:53:11.799-05:002010-04-08T12:53:11.799-05:00i read it for the third time and still can't q...i read it for the third time and still can't quite get it. How do you write like this? This is beautiful, mind blowing. I wish i could express myself this way. You know the thing about expressions, you need to convey them to others and i think you actually framed them in our hearts.hmmm..zacharyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09245391835330356292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-1628523883687834232010-04-08T07:14:08.451-05:002010-04-08T07:14:08.451-05:00I'm bathing in the Malaysian tropical heat now...I'm bathing in the Malaysian tropical heat now, but I was missing something like this:<br /><br />'your warmth was too easyi needed an ice queento chill my soulwith her snowflake hair and her frosty kissesand her icy gazethat pretend symmetry'<br /><br />Greetings from Kuala Lumpur.A Cuban In Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16423293358605007539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-27275300814110674612010-04-07T18:13:26.424-05:002010-04-07T18:13:26.424-05:00one thing i love about your poetry is how effortle...one thing i love about your poetry is how effortless and natural it feels - they roll down the page like water - and you don't pull punches. there's power in that.<br /><br />in this, there is a lot of geometry in the beginning - but the cold angles of science seem to give way to the inspiration of art - the pigments, dancing, bells - like that constant battle between head and heart - joaquin carvelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03193680725157157864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-82388832589502549392010-04-07T15:13:13.583-05:002010-04-07T15:13:13.583-05:00LW - ;-)
Steve - Thank you. :-)
Jen - Hello, and...LW - ;-)<br /><br />Steve - Thank you. :-)<br /><br />Jen - Hello, and thank you. I hope you will come back and visit again.<br /><br />Zachary - It's okay. I get tongue-tied sometimes. I'm glad you liked it, though.<br /><br />Sir Thomas - You're too sweet. I'll be back soon with something new...<br /><br />Lorenza - It sort of felt like a roller coaster writing it, too. I'm Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-24128931339584975932010-04-06T19:08:06.968-05:002010-04-06T19:08:06.968-05:00Nev- so much is so familiar
mistaking kindness for...Nev- so much is so familiar<br />mistaking kindness for love. oh, yeah<br />the wooden air<br />the warmth being too easy, needing the ice queen-then paying in hot blood.<br />I grasped this in clenched fist and said "fool!!" (to me)<br />~rickRickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12466743523566419268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-61948245167452541112010-04-06T13:10:12.093-05:002010-04-06T13:10:12.093-05:00This beautiful poem is like a roller-coaster ride ...This beautiful poem is like a roller-coaster ride in the landscape of human feelings. Just wonderful<br /><br />XXXLorenzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02002945955784775592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-79054878689609659022010-04-06T12:18:40.376-05:002010-04-06T12:18:40.376-05:00Nevine Im sorry but i need more from you...
pleas...Nevine Im sorry but i need more from you...<br /><br />please give...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-13505983351175949412010-04-06T08:10:44.716-05:002010-04-06T08:10:44.716-05:00Oh Nevine, i don't know what to say...i can fe...Oh Nevine, i don't know what to say...i can feel it, I can't quite put them in words..<br /><br />You had me here..<br /><br />"and your thoughts <br />bleed into my head like pigments"<br /><br />I love this Nevine.zacharyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09245391835330356292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-81061281848650388002010-04-05T18:15:18.382-05:002010-04-05T18:15:18.382-05:00This is so beautiful! I'm so excited that I fo...This is so beautiful! I'm so excited that I found your blog!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-71334362305586444812010-04-05T16:44:43.087-05:002010-04-05T16:44:43.087-05:00From my mind to yours--whispering--Shhhhh: Beautif...From my mind to yours--whispering--Shhhhh: Beautiful!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17498524940140288735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-53230590341336448752010-04-05T16:21:46.757-05:002010-04-05T16:21:46.757-05:00gotcha ;)gotcha ;)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-50014137458686606312010-04-05T15:43:24.092-05:002010-04-05T15:43:24.092-05:00Martin – I appreciate that, and thank you for shar...Martin – I appreciate that, and thank you for sharing your “highlights”, too.<br /><br />Silver – Oh, it’s good to see you here. And I know you’re not devoid of inspiration. We just sometimes stumble against obstacles, but then we walk around them and find new inspiration.<br /><br />Unseen Rajasthan – Thank you.<br /><br />Cat – Oh my God, you came back! I mean, thank you so so much, Cat. That’sNevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-86058608823170194182010-04-05T15:43:07.027-05:002010-04-05T15:43:07.027-05:00Nipun – It’s nice to be transported to another pla...Nipun – It’s nice to be transported to another place, every so often. I felt transported writing this piece, and I’m happy to hear that you shared the journey with me. I love maths as well, and it was fun to play around with some of the ideas and concepts of geometry for this piece. Thanks for the always kind words, Nipun. :-)<br /><br />Jai – Thanks again. I’ll keep experimenting, I guess.<br />Nevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-51864436526426584772010-04-05T12:27:16.960-05:002010-04-05T12:27:16.960-05:00Nevine, you are truly a constellation.
For me this...Nevine, you are truly a constellation.<br />For me this speaks of a woman who wants<br />to essentially disappear, but not become<br />non-existent. Someone who is continually<br />haunted by I feel her 'other self'.<br /><br />She sits, really lives on the echo of her<br />dreams and is haunted by stale poems beating<br />like drums inside her head. Love, knowledge,<br />her identity Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256391836026637655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-49819416078414692752010-04-05T11:38:35.805-05:002010-04-05T11:38:35.805-05:00A kaleidoscope of words—your prose is eloquently c...A kaleidoscope of words—your prose is eloquently crafted with the compounding reflections of the heart and mind. Nice work.EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-67847375054315190312010-04-05T08:13:50.001-05:002010-04-05T08:13:50.001-05:00My god. I mean the thing is, there are so many le...My god. I mean the thing is, there are so many levels to this poem that it would take weeks to decipher. Walls of consciousness, walls of illusion, separation, out of walls, liquid boundaries, so many metaphors here. I really can't begin to comprehend the levels of this poem and yet it washes over me like a symphony that wants to be played again and again.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-8481110299503050112010-04-05T03:13:59.662-05:002010-04-05T03:13:59.662-05:00Beautiful and lovely post !! Nice post!!Unseen Raj...Beautiful and lovely post !! Nice post!!<a href="http://www.unseenrajasthan.com/" rel="nofollow">Unseen Rajasthan</a>Unseen India Tourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02181236800235013022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7397758960634925062.post-29623475711733847292010-04-05T03:00:37.321-05:002010-04-05T03:00:37.321-05:00always a pleasure reading.. especially when one is...always a pleasure reading.. especially when one is devoid of some inspiration.<br /><br />~SilverSilverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15559987944096301573noreply@blogger.com